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I've no crystal ball,
no misty eyes,
no magic
wandering
the halls
of my heart,
but I can tell you now,
today,
just how our friendship will



fall.
Well...this is kind of a downer, but...

Enjoy. 
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jrmalone Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, I really felt this. It sums up perfectly something that I just went through -- friend fell hard. Mine was a bummer, but your poem is brilliant! Thank you for this.
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank YOU, sir! 

Yeah...it's not a fun thing from what I can tell. 
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jrmalone Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nah, it never is a fun thing. :blush:
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ah well. Part of life for some, I suppose. :shrug: 
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Scottluvslocks Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Professional General Artist
Sorry, I promise to be more detailed next time, but the truth is this piece made my heart sink cause I felt it.
Happy?
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No! I didn't mean it that way! 

I meant those were all the sort of adjectives a writer loves to hear, not that your comment was insufficient! 
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Scottluvslocks Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Professional General Artist
Just messin'. Rofl Both answers were similar, don't you think? Just worded differently.
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well, yes. But I thought you'd thought I was being rude, I guess. 

Thanks for both of your comments! 
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Scottluvslocks Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Professional General Artist
My pleasure Kaylin. Goodnight
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shep4life Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Total downer but I love it :)
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It came out of a pretty disappointing conversation...

I'm glad you love it though! :D 
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shep4life Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry this came from a bad conversation..are you ok?
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, yes. I wrote to feel better, at least for now. 
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shep4life Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It is cathartic 
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, certainly. 
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shep4life Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Like therapy...my first poems stemmed from a frustrating family life where there was a lot of yelling...so I wrote to cope and it spread from there
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I wrote because I love lying as a kid. Making up these hardly believable stories. 

And then I learned that I could make truths with words. And that shit was magical. No longer did I have to lie. I could create. 
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014   Writer
Brilliant movement and with such candid emotion. Not all friendships will be like that...

Regards,
John.
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I should hope not...it's not very fun. 


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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014   Writer
I understand all too well.
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry to hear that, sir.. 
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014   Writer
No need. :)

Keep smiling.
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, alright...

If I MUST.... :P 
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014   Writer
Haha. :D
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're demanding.... 
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Scottluvslocks Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Professional General Artist
Intense, raw, honest
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ooh....all good adjectives... 
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