I've no crystal ball,
no misty eyes,
of my heart,
but I can tell you now,
just how our friendship will
Well...this is kind of a downer, but...
Wow, I really felt this. It sums up perfectly something that I just went through -- friend fell hard. Mine was a bummer, but your poem is brilliant! Thank you for this.
Thank YOU, sir!
Yeah...it's not a fun thing from what I can tell.
Sorry, I promise to be more detailed next time, but the truth is this piece made my heart sink cause I felt it.
No! I didn't mean it that way!
I meant those were all the sort of adjectives a writer loves to hear, not that your comment was insufficient!
Total downer but I love it
It came out of a pretty disappointing conversation...
I'm glad you love it though!
I'm sorry this came from a bad conversation..are you ok?
Oh, yes. I wrote to feel better, at least for now.
It is cathartic
Like therapy...my first poems stemmed from a frustrating family life where there was a lot of yelling...so I wrote to cope and it spread from there
I should hope not...it's not very fun.
Intense, raw, honest