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There's a
sickeningly
sullen
boy
who wakes
with a song
in his
humming
head.

Oh,
how I wish that
just
for
tomorrow
I could
be
that
song.
Woke with two songs AND this poem in my head today. 

Today's gonna be lovely, I just know it. 

Enjoy! 
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:iconjohnashleigh:
JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014   Writer
The desire and hopefulness burns bright. A very original approach. Thankyou for sharing.

Regards,
John.
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Certainly my gentlest critic, as per usual... XP Thanks! 
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:iconjohnashleigh:
JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014   Writer
And you are my favourite poet.
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
...FAVOURITE?! Are you sure? 

Out of everyone? 

*sigh* Well, alright....
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:iconjohnashleigh:
JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014   Writer
Well of course. :)
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
/.\ 

And this is how "bashful" starts....
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:iconchromeantennae:
chromeantennae Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is so beautiful, Kaylin. Great job!
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awww shucks! Thanks so much, brother! :D 
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:iconchromeantennae:
chromeantennae Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure, sis'! :D
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:icon19andmugsy:
19andMugsy Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful 
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, sir! ^^ 
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:icon19andmugsy:
19andMugsy Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
very welcome :)
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:iconpyroanubis:
PyroAnubis Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student General Artist
Nice write. Powerful words. :P
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nice comment. Ever kinder. :P 
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That1PersonYouForgot Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Great job! :clap:
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!!!! ^^ 
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:iconthat1personyouforgot:
That1PersonYouForgot Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! :D
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
And who would that boy be? :)
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That boy is pure fiction this time around. Inspired fiction, technically? 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
So, he's an imaginary person. :)
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well, yes, but the emotion behind it is drawn from reality. Proper poetry, I suppose. XP 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
That's nice. It means it comes from the heart :)
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
All my writing does, to be fair. XP 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Good. That's the way it's supposed to be.
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I agree, sir! :nod: 
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shep4life Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nice
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D 
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:iconshep4life:
shep4life Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome!
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