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There's a
sickeningly
sullen
boy
who wakes
with a song
in his
humming
head.

Oh,
how I wish that
just
for
tomorrow
I could
be
that
song.
Woke with two songs AND this poem in my head today. 

Today's gonna be lovely, I just know it. 

Enjoy! 
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:iconjohnashleigh:
JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Professional Writer
The desire and hopefulness burns bright. A very original approach. Thankyou for sharing.

Regards,
John.
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Certainly my gentlest critic, as per usual... XP Thanks! 
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:iconjohnashleigh:
JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Professional Writer
And you are my favourite poet.
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
...FAVOURITE?! Are you sure? 

Out of everyone? 

*sigh* Well, alright....
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Professional Writer
Well of course. :)
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
/.\ 

And this is how "bashful" starts....
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is so beautiful, Kaylin. Great job!
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awww shucks! Thanks so much, brother! :D 
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:iconchromeantennae:
chromeantennae Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure, sis'! :D
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19andMugsy Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful 
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