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there's
a kind
of longing
that stops
your breath
mid-dance,

a hammer
through your
record player heart;

all the organs stop
to gawk at the commotion.

it burns up
your gums
like a french kiss with
whiskey,
your teeth rotting
even as your lips embrace:
toxicity.

it throws your heart
again and again
against your ribs:
relentless.

but you
you are left
with staggered breath
and a smile,

because you've learned to want for this life
just as thoroughly you wanted to leave it.
Enjoy! 
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PyroAnubis Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Student General Artist
This is very well written and thoughtful.
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very, very much! ^^ 
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I-Guardian-l Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
This is absolutely incredible. Imagery throughout and power in every word. I could only hope to write such poetry. Great job! :) 
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
..... o.o 

So kind, good sir. 

Thank you! :huggle: 
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I-Guardian-l Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
Your quite welcome. :)
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Imagery galore here. :love:
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for all the attention today!!! You're too kind! 
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It was my pleasure. <33
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
AWWW!!! :glomp: 
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:glomp:
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