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You broke
a part
of
me
I
don't
know
how to
fix.
Isn't really anything special but it needed to be written all the same. 

Enjoy! 
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:iconadrianminotaur:
AdrianMinotaur Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Truth, may not be as beautiful as a butterfly, but it needs to be addressed all the same. Perhaps it's more a cocoon, something to grow in beauty over time, thank you for the elegantly simple poem. ;)
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I never want to STOP growing. I'll let the universe be a forever cocoon, thank you very much. 

Thanks for reading and for your kind words! ^^ 
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014   Writer
A genius line. The movement here is incredibly original. If you do not know how to fix it, then I am sure someone else will. ;)

Regards,
John.
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's the hope, anyway. 

But in some ways, I wouldn't mind staying a bit broken. :P 
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:iconjohnashleigh:
JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014   Writer
It is the imperfections that make us perfect.
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Not even that, I've just learned a lot in my broken times. More than I ever learn between breaks. 
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:iconjohnashleigh:
JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014   Writer
I can appreciate that. :)
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Glad to hear it....feeling less crazy. XP 
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:iconjohnashleigh:
JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014   Writer
;)
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19andMugsy Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
perfect title words and agreeable note 
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! :D 
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:icon19andmugsy:
19andMugsy Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome! 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
It is special because it's simple and short but it's powerful.
And broken people are always more interesting than normal people.
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That does seem to be the case as I meet more and more people... 

Thanks for reading. 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
Yep, I know that sensation.

You're welcome :)
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:iconshep4life:
shep4life Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is good
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, sir. 
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:iconshep4life:
shep4life Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You got it!
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:iconguarded-stallion:
Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student General Artist
Relates to me a lot.
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:iconbleedingprophecies:
BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
For that I am sorry. 

Thanks for reading, love! 
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:iconguarded-stallion:
Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Don't be sorry.
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